Code red smog

Air polution is a major problem in China after rapid industrialisation.

Beijing haiku:

A man on a bench in code red smog
pulls down his mask
To drag on a cigarette.

Kittycatkin: Too many syllables; a haiku has 17, 5-7-5

Proper (Kittycatkin) version:

Man in Code Red smog-
sits on bench, pulls down his mask,
lights a cigarette.

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